Essay & Personal Statement Editing
Essays that sound like you on your best day
Admissions essays usually fail in one of two ways. Either they're so generic that anyone could have written them, or they're so overwritten that they sound like a thesaurus instead of a person. The fix for both is the same: concrete stories, honest reflection, and clean prose that sounds like you.
Every edit comes back as tracked changes with margin comments explaining why I changed what I changed, so your voice stays yours and you actually get better at this instead of just outsourcing it. Two full revision rounds are included, and each round comes back within 48 hours.
What's included
- Deep structural and line editing with tracked changes
- Margin comments explaining every significant change
- Two full revision rounds included
- A prompt-fit check, because a beautiful essay that dodges the question still loses
- 48-hour turnaround on each round
Common questions
Do Canadian medical schools require a personal statement?
It depends on the school. The OMSAS schools mostly use short supplementary essays and the ABS rather than one long personal statement, while schools elsewhere in Canada have their own written components, like UBC's non-academic sections. I edit for the specific prompt and school rather than treating everything as one generic essay.